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Shino Bad Dream
Number of posts : 114 Age : 33 Location : in the abyss of sorrow Kekkei Genkai : setsuzokuguchi, Registration date : 2009-01-13
| Subject: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:05 pm | |
| " i walk into the dojo looking around..wondering if i should practice outside. the though didn't last long since it's below freezing out there" | |
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Zeik Hellgate Cursed Flame Of Oblivion
Number of posts : 3709 Age : 34 Location : Within the Eternal Flame Kekkei Genkai : Makai Houka Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:11 pm | |
| "i walk in with my scarf still covering my face"
water right... well im no good with it yet.but i guess i can help you when it comes to control..and minimizing chakra drain.
"zeik flicks his finger and a stream of hellfire spirals around him"
ok i call these streams as i stated earlier. they are thin whip like tentacle of pwnage..better known as hellfire. using natural chakra im able to control them completely and by blending dark and fire..plus other things i make the hellfire what you see here. now since you aren't strong enough to control the water you make..however you make it with out moving..use your arm to guide the water...understand me so far | |
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Shino Bad Dream
Number of posts : 114 Age : 33 Location : in the abyss of sorrow Kekkei Genkai : setsuzokuguchi, Registration date : 2009-01-13
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:16 pm | |
| "after hearing zeiks words shino stands up. she then holds her hands out in front of her. opening them she closes her eyes. standing there for a moment before saying" connect " she moves her hands in the opposite direction and the thick snow around her flows with her hands. it quickly turns to water and spins around her. it's bubbly and unstable and shino keeps squinting her eyes" ze..zeik..my arms hurt.... "shino not wanting to embarrass herself whispers those word and tries to act like she is doing fine" | |
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Zeik Hellgate Cursed Flame Of Oblivion
Number of posts : 3709 Age : 34 Location : Within the Eternal Flame Kekkei Genkai : Makai Houka Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:28 pm | |
| "zeik sighs a bit and walks closer to the girl"
it would take less chakra if you moved the water you just made. what you are doing is good ..but it takes more chakra to keep it waiting. move your arms and make the water flow with you. | |
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Shino Bad Dream
Number of posts : 114 Age : 33 Location : in the abyss of sorrow Kekkei Genkai : setsuzokuguchi, Registration date : 2009-01-13
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:30 pm | |
| "shino takes a couple of steps so if she goofs she want hit zeik. not that her feeble attack would do anything..just she wouldn't wanna piss him off..he seems rather temperamental from what i read about him" ..i will try " shino begins to spin her hands around in a very unique fashion. the water doesn't at first follow her nor does it stable out" ..i mustn't fail you "shino sees her "love" face and the water begins to not only stable out but follow her hands moves" ZEIK I GOT IT | |
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Zeik Hellgate Cursed Flame Of Oblivion
Number of posts : 3709 Age : 34 Location : Within the Eternal Flame Kekkei Genkai : Makai Houka Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:30 pm | |
| thats good..but chill on the happy
"zeik sends the stream for the girl"
deal with that | |
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Shino Bad Dream
Number of posts : 114 Age : 33 Location : in the abyss of sorrow Kekkei Genkai : setsuzokuguchi, Registration date : 2009-01-13
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:33 pm | |
| "shino sends a stream of water to combat the stream of hellfire. she then sends two more to make sure the fire want burst though" did i do it | |
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Zeik Hellgate Cursed Flame Of Oblivion
Number of posts : 3709 Age : 34 Location : Within the Eternal Flame Kekkei Genkai : Makai Houka Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:34 pm | |
| "the stream of fire would burst though the watet and head for you. neariong you it's tip seems to drip with something" | |
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Shino Bad Dream
Number of posts : 114 Age : 33 Location : in the abyss of sorrow Kekkei Genkai : setsuzokuguchi, Registration date : 2009-01-13
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:37 pm | |
| "shino jumps out of the way of the stream. expecting it will follow her she draws kris naga and waits" what the..fire that isnt put out by water..thats unheard of. | |
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Zeik Hellgate Cursed Flame Of Oblivion
Number of posts : 3709 Age : 34 Location : Within the Eternal Flame Kekkei Genkai : Makai Houka Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 9:28 pm | |
| humph didnt do as much research as you though.
"zeik flicks his finger again and the stream splits into two and tries to close the new girl in"
..another weak new gen | |
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Shino Bad Dream
Number of posts : 114 Age : 33 Location : in the abyss of sorrow Kekkei Genkai : setsuzokuguchi, Registration date : 2009-01-13
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 9:32 pm | |
| weal! "those words echoed inside of shino's head." ...i cant be weak "shino connects the streams of water she made to her kris and naga" go there "she yells this as she tosses both of her daggers though zeiks streams. the daggers had wind chakra on them so they would cut clean though the streams and head for zeik" NOT YET "shino yells this and pulls her hands back, thrusting them towards zeik a bubble of water flows though the streams. the bubble would help keep the hellfire at bay while my daggers headed for you" | |
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Zeik Hellgate Cursed Flame Of Oblivion
Number of posts : 3709 Age : 34 Location : Within the Eternal Flame Kekkei Genkai : Makai Houka Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 9:55 pm | |
| "zeiks jumps out of the way of the daggers and they hit the ground. zeik looks to his hellfire that is now incased in a bubble if water"
meh..likei would realyl get hit with simple tricks like that
"zeik snaps his finger and the two hellfire beigns to heat up. it will take some time before it reconnects and is able to break though the bubble"
stop using the water like that.. use more chakra and make it dense..otherwise poeple wont be afraid of it.
"zeik draws kunou and damnation and heads for the girl"
lets play kid | |
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Shino Bad Dream
Number of posts : 114 Age : 33 Location : in the abyss of sorrow Kekkei Genkai : setsuzokuguchi, Registration date : 2009-01-13
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 10:03 pm | |
| "shino pulls the streams and kris and naga trails behind zeik" i have a name you know "shino says this as she beings flicking her fingers at zeik causing the small flakes of snow to turn to needles and head for zeik" | |
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Zeik Hellgate Cursed Flame Of Oblivion
Number of posts : 3709 Age : 34 Location : Within the Eternal Flame Kekkei Genkai : Makai Houka Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 10:10 pm | |
| "zeik spins around once sending a wave of hellfire to combat both the needles and the oncoming kris naga"
you're kid to me..just as long as you fight like one
"zeik draws his hand back"
phoneix
"thrusting his hand towards shino sends a wave of needles at her"
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Aeon Revorse Reikikage
Number of posts : 3371 Age : 32 Location : Bursting with Energy Kekkei Genkai : Chakra Eye/Burst Registration date : 2008-06-26
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 10:16 pm | |
| ((Whoa?! Isn't Phoenix Burst ZK's old move?)) | |
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Shino Bad Dream
Number of posts : 114 Age : 33 Location : in the abyss of sorrow Kekkei Genkai : setsuzokuguchi, Registration date : 2009-01-13
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 10:23 pm | |
| "clapping my hands i send a wave of wind that knocks the needles away some of them head for zeik. shino claps her hands again and as she opens them streams of water are seen in them" got you know "shino smiles as she opens her hands completely. the streams that where stuck to her hand heads towards zeik. the streams are denser then normal water so they would be able to pierce zeiks skin also as they approach zeik they fire needles of chakra at him. shino yanks her right hand and her daggers are snatched into there sheathes behind her back" | |
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Zeik Hellgate Cursed Flame Of Oblivion
Number of posts : 3709 Age : 34 Location : Within the Eternal Flame Kekkei Genkai : Makai Houka Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 11:00 pm | |
| "zeik spinning his blade blocks the water needles and cuts though the first stream"
same ol new gen moves
"zeik spins around avoiding the other streams and swings his sword down in the atempt to cut though shino" | |
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Shino Bad Dream
Number of posts : 114 Age : 33 Location : in the abyss of sorrow Kekkei Genkai : setsuzokuguchi, Registration date : 2009-01-13
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 11:08 pm | |
| "drawing kris naga i block zeiks blade" you know i wanted you close to me. you favor mid and long range combat..since you can control your hellfire "shino swings her naga towards zeiks chest. while the streams he though he was done with turn around and head for him." ..also whats with the new gen insults "shino stands ready to slice zeik if he moves with kris" | |
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Zeik Hellgate Cursed Flame Of Oblivion
Number of posts : 3709 Age : 34 Location : Within the Eternal Flame Kekkei Genkai : Makai Houka Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Wed Jan 14, 2009 11:25 pm | |
| "zeik makes replica's of conviction. while he continues to hold back kris. the replica's would flow with lightning chakra. the blade would tear though the streams of water and zeik would get slice by the naga"
not bad..although..you arent anything special... | |
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Shino Bad Dream
Number of posts : 114 Age : 33 Location : in the abyss of sorrow Kekkei Genkai : setsuzokuguchi, Registration date : 2009-01-13
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Fri Jan 16, 2009 11:11 am | |
| nothing..special"shino jumps back away from zeik"..i guess in the eyes of a man with the last name hellgate,i would look pretty normal huh "shino spoke these words covering up the fact that zeik was calling her weak" zeik..do you know any jutsu you can teach me. "shino fell to the ground and looked at the floating zeik" | |
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Zeik Hellgate Cursed Flame Of Oblivion
Number of posts : 3709 Age : 34 Location : Within the Eternal Flame Kekkei Genkai : Makai Houka Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Thu Jan 22, 2009 3:38 am | |
| hmm..giving you more powerful moves would be helpful
"zeik slowly floats to the ground and touches his lip"
...hmm well..do you know the rasengan | |
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Shino Bad Dream
Number of posts : 114 Age : 33 Location : in the abyss of sorrow Kekkei Genkai : setsuzokuguchi, Registration date : 2009-01-13
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Thu Jan 22, 2009 4:39 am | |
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Zeik Hellgate Cursed Flame Of Oblivion
Number of posts : 3709 Age : 34 Location : Within the Eternal Flame Kekkei Genkai : Makai Houka Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Thu Jan 22, 2009 5:14 pm | |
| ok. well i will teach you that jutsu.
"zeik grabs a balloon and tosses it to shino"
i wont you to send chakra though that water balloon. once inside of it you have to shape it into a sphere until it pops | |
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Shino Bad Dream
Number of posts : 114 Age : 33 Location : in the abyss of sorrow Kekkei Genkai : setsuzokuguchi, Registration date : 2009-01-13
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Thu Jan 22, 2009 5:53 pm | |
| "shino catches the balloon"...pop huh "shino sits and begins to rotate her chakra inside the balloon. the balloon moves in an irregular shape" | |
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Zeik Hellgate Cursed Flame Of Oblivion
Number of posts : 3709 Age : 34 Location : Within the Eternal Flame Kekkei Genkai : Makai Houka Registration date : 2008-07-11
| Subject: Re: As you ordered Thu Jan 22, 2009 6:21 pm | |
| good keep at it.
"zeik sits on the floor across from shino"
now you need to make the chakra spiral..turn it left...then right so on and so on | |
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