Shadow's Story

There is an evil energy that causes absolute destruction. The supreme master of the fist, Shadow, this lone warrior is a wanderer shrouded with evil intent. He searches for challengers with enough potential to kill.

Shadow is an evil demon spirit created by Mugen Kurai. The demons’ essence and spirit reside within his mask. However, in order to interact and fight in the physical world, Shadow requires a body, a host. Once shadow's mask comes in contact with someone’s face, he immediately possesses the victim and gains complete control of him or her.

Shadow is recognizable by his red and black gi, black eyes and of course, his dark red mask. Shadow is an exceptional fighter, very quick and agile; his kicks even rival Spike’s. He has a unique fighting style but will also inherit the styles of whoever he possesses. Shadow does not have a specific special ability like others but he does however have certain capabilities that are out of this world.
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There is none who can stop me

Silver Shadow wrote:

There is a evile energy that causes absolute destruction.....the supreme master of the fist Shadow this lone warrior is a wandered,shrouded with evil intent\'\'....he searches for challengers with enough potential to kill.

REWRITE. May-chan I gots this one

There is an evil energy that causes absolute destruction. The supreme master of the fist, Shadow, this lone warrior is a wanderer shrouded with evil intent. He searches for challengers with enough potential to kill him.

Thats really vague...it doesnt give any information about your characters past, or storyline. Although I guess it will do for now. Just in the future it would be appriciated if you could elaborate more on events in your characters past to create a storyline.

My brain hurts... this is so hard to read.

Thats why I fixed it lol

ok thanks not my other stuff go look at it

You misspelled STUFF

Do you want me to edit that too? Geez...ok.

yes

Sorry... Those kind of misspellings drive me crazy and I am a "Plural Nazi", so add your plurals to the ends of your words or feel my wrath.

Kairi, dont be quite that harsh. Nit-picking on each misspelling, as annoying as it may be, isnt going to help right now. We need to help him do it right, then you can teach him how to spell.

Oh and Silver, that edit is much better.

I like that